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• RayC says:

  Randomo had a point. I did feel a bit rushed in the beginning, and even I personally felt it didn't flush out the whole scene too well. Although the changes are minor, I do think this one is vastly superior to the previous version.

  There were no rules saying I couldn't re-submit a better version of the old one. So I can only assume the competition allows for me to do this unless I'm told otherwise. Anyway Enjoy!

  48 weeks 4 days ago